And you never stop to surprise us... If you keep working like this, you are gonna win this thing. I hate you already, and we are only in the 3rd round!! :D
jk...naah I can't hate you :)... If you make me hate someone, it's gonna be myself, cause I'm older and not as talented as you are. Lucky for me I cannot hate myself either, cause I'm awesome... seriously... like... I'm definitly not crying over my guitar right now ...O, _ O
:P
Aw shucks! Kind of you to say, IYD. I think we both know your song is in-fucking-credible this round... I'm blown away and working on reviewing it properly, cuz man, it's killer!
But thank you. Please don't stain your guitar. :3
Oh yeah... I can definitly picture a big fancy bar/restaurant with a lot of elegant looking people. The owner is well known, cause of his back room business meetings, where no policemen have ever been.
The waitresses are really hot, but some of them have a sad and empty look on their faces.
Amazing piece of music here... I'm out of words, sooo.... I'll say bananas.
Bananas
Viel Glück! :D
Yeah! Thats exactly the situation i wanted to describe. I have seen the scene of the movie "Once upon a Time in America" in my mind when Noodles came out of the jail, entered the gangs secret nightclub and so on :)
Dont know what to say, too, so let me say: Cucumbers!
Dank dir für die Glückwünsche! Ich wünsch dir auch just the best für diese runde. Langsam wirds echt richtig interessant hier :D
Great to have you back, d00d!
Super mix btw. Your guitars sound massive and you can hear the "metaljonus" style everywhere :)... your playing and soli are amazing. I don't know what to say anymore... boobs? boobs are awesome! :D
cheers
Thanks! It's good to be back! Boobs are the BEST!!!
This a great song, man!! I love the melodies and chord progressions you have there. The vocals are amazing. The rythmic of the song makes you wanna dance from the start :D... My respect to the singer. She has a beautiful voice.
Keep 'em comin'! :)
Wow, I logged back in today and this track has had loads more views than it did, wander what happened hey :) I mainly use my soundcloud to put my tracks up to be honest, you can check my work out at www.soundcloud.com/david_orton Thanks for the feedback though!
Damn dude! You're too fast. I haven't even started developing my ideas for this round. I have a really interesting one, but it still on the stage of "don't know if it's gonna work out".
Your song is amazing. I'm a fan now. I love the feeling the piano brings with the melody at the start. I love how it tries to jump between modes but stays aeolian, before the sad slow part.
I wish you the best of luck this round! ^_^
Haha, thanks! I've been the first person to submit a song in each post-audition round. I try to wait, but I just can't seem to do it. :3 Once a song idea begins to form, it demands almost all of my attention until it's finished. It is a tremendous form of motivation, but equally as exhausting.
Your appreciation of my newest piece really serves to invigorate my spirit as this contest gets more and more dangerous. Everyone is really focused, and the level of talent is incredible. I'm just so happy to still be here, and no words can really describe that feeling. Thank you so much for leaving a review (so quickly after submission, too) and for becoming a fan! I am honoured.
Best of luck to you, as well! Come what may...this is not the end. :D
It's a really good composition! But I will give you my latino point of view (I'm from peru. I make mostly metal but that doesn't mean I dont enjoy going salsa dancing once in a while :P...)
The production was great! great instruments, great chord progressions and super melodies. But salsa is mostly about the percussion. The timbales have to be as present as the melodic instruments.
And too many tempo changes... the song starts as a bachata or chacha song. Salsa is generaly not slow and has almost none tempo changes. It's about rythm. If it changes to much, it's harder to dance and it isn't fun anymore.
Don't get me wrong, I still think that it's an awesome jazz composition :)
Mucha suerte y exitos en el concurso! (good luck and success in the contest :D...)
Hey there,
thanks a lot for your detailed review, which is really highly appreciated. Thats exactly the form of constructive critizism i need to improve! I have to confess - when i started this piece i didnt have a clue how salsa actually works. I had to look on wikipedia which instruments are used in salsa pieces (i didnt even know what congas are :) ). After that i tried out some chords on the piano and built the rest of the piece around this core. I have not expected that this kind of music would be as complicated to generate - the structure, the rhythm (didnt try out rhythmical stuff until this project) and to accentuate the main melody in front of all those instruments (i think the piece has over 20 tracks now).
I wasnt sure about the tempo changes. First i had the idea to bring in some singing - would have been cool, but i dont know any hispano-hablantes who could sing for me :(. So i decided to bring a more jazz-inspired virtuoise structure and inserted a lot of changes ... maybe i have overdone a little bit. I cant dance so i dont have a clue how you actually would dance on this :D
So thanks a lot for your very useful review! I also wish you good luck and success in the contest!
Saludos cordiales!
dude... Dude!... DUUUDE!! are you getting djenty with me? are you getting F%&king djenty with me???!!
I'll djent the $H!T out of you!!
:P
...btw, nice song. :D
Awesome riffing. Your mixes are getting better aswell. Like darkside said, this one has more dynamics (what I personally like), without beeing quiet. LOVE the atmospheric feel going everywhere in the song. It's like a new style for you, but you can still hear it's metaljonus playing.
Dude, we should do a collab again sometime. Do some cover and stuff :D... been practicing my singing (and mixing, playing, pooping, etc...)
DJENT AT ME BRO!!!! lol I've been listening to a lot of tesseract/periphery(as always) and scar symmetry's Pitch Black Progress album(soooo gooood). The heavyness and spacey feel some of the tracks have on that album got me wanting to try some spacey heavy as balls stuff. So this is it lol. I am always down to collab dude! Shoot me a pm and we can talk game plan! :D
Awesome stuff Alti!! really awesome. It's atmospheric and musical. I like the beat and drums... It gives the song kind of an industrial feeling, making you see how the biodome works to keep people alive.
really nice work! ^_^
Thanks man! :D That's exactly part of what I was trying to convey. Thank you for your lovely review~
awesome! xD... this is the best version of this song! nice work dude. Your mix sound a little harsh but the rest was great!
5/5 and 10/10 from me ^^
Yes, yes yes... I know. This mix, it is el terrible. I'm glad you can look past it's inescapable crunchy distortedness though :)
THANKS DUDE :DD
OMG dude, this ist f%#ing GREAT!!! Love the riffing!
Thanks dude!!!
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